Kamis, 29 Oktober 2009

MY HOBBY


MY HOBBY

I love soccer very much, and that is one of my hobbies. I guess that is most favorite sports in this world, or perhaps in this universe, because our life just in this earth anyway. Well, I used to play soccer every Sunday morning in my hometown, but here in Padang,i doubt,i can play soccer because of one reason, the reason is Padang too hot. I usually go to the field at 6:30 am, because I can jogging around that field for 20 minutes, and then I play soccer with my friends. I usually play soccer for 3 hours, and that’s really exciting, more fun than play video game at home. You must try it out!

In the match, I always became an attacker or in offensive line, because I’m tall and fast also strong. And I’m glad to be like that, because I’m the important player in the match who will get score for the team. And when I make goal, I feel amazing. So that’s about my hobby, you may try it sometime, and you’ll feel good after that, although you loose. Believe me!


by:ILHAM MUFTI

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5 komentar:

  1. riyan31 Oktober 2009 pukul 01.48

    the story is good.your hobby is interesting..
    I like sports too..

    BalasHapus
  2. riyan31 Oktober 2009 pukul 03.10

    your story is great,
    I like sports too...

    BalasHapus
  3. ekajuwita31 Oktober 2009 pukul 21.09

    I can understand your writing. Your writing is good eventhough there are some grammatical errors. You should have used ‘it’ instead of’that’.’Padang too hot’ should be ‘Padang is too hot.’I can jogging’should be ‘I can do jogging’.Because after modal you must not use present participle. I t must be followed by infinitive. ‘More fun than play video game at home’should be’it gives me more fun than playing video games does’. ‘I always became’should be’I always become’. ‘Loose’ should be ‘lose’

    BalasHapus
  4. Anonim31 Oktober 2009 pukul 21.24

    hey IL...ne Lia...

    oou..h..you know, for me you have a boring hobby.

    And you order me to try it???

    Noooo....!!!
    it's make tired, and the most important is I can't play it...

    BalasHapus
  5. Simple boy1 November 2009 pukul 00.48

    I think U should try checking your grammar more than once.ok, yeah, may be soccer is nice hobby during U don't get something bad when U play it..

    BalasHapus

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